my family live in Sidoarjo,my father name is Legowo Sulistijono,my mother name is Dyah puji Rahayu,my first brother name is Eldy,and my little brother name is Akari Kanzo
my father work as lecturer,and my mother work as assistant lecturer.my first brother lives in malang he is college student in university brawijaya malang,and my little brother is elementary student.
i graduated in senior high school muhammadiyah 1 taman,now i'm a college student in electronic engineering polytechnic institute of surabaya,i learned in the majors multimedia broadcasting D3.My hobbies is drawing logo,art,and playing basketball,and my dream is tv station owner company director and director film maker.i hope my dream or my future goals is become true.thanks for your attention.
Nice mindmap you got there. Love it
BalasHapusBrother definitely funny. May not borrow?
BalasHapusWhere is your father work as lecture ?
BalasHapusi think your mind map is too flat and need an art taste maybe :D hehe
BalasHapusyour mind map is simple you must to try to make it to be creative
BalasHapusyour sentence line 22 about "My hobbies is drawing logo,art,and playing basketball,and my dream is tv station owner company director and director film maker", i think that "to be" isn't "is" but "are" and then the subject it must be "My Hobbies" because that is Plural. ^^ keep spirit rizky to expand your creativity :D
BalasHapushaha I agree with Putra's comment. that your mind map its too simple~~
BalasHapushello rizky ^~^)/ your map from computer graphic .-. correct me if I wrong haha XD and your description is too short
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nice mind map,but is too simple bro
BalasHapusrizky... your mind map....... hmm so simple!, you can be more creative, okay?
BalasHapusand i like your brothers name hihi "Akari Kanzo" like Japanese name
rizky, i also like your lil brother's name wkwk but why his name is different with you and your big brother?.-.
BalasHapusI think u've wrong gramatical in this sentence"...i learned in the majors multimedia broadcasting D3.My hobbies is...." Improve like this : "majoring in multimedia broadcasting. My hobbies are...". And please describe more. It's too short description.
BalasHapus(ratnanuha.blogspot.com)
why I feel so flat when reading it -_- improve your English, alright? fighting!!
BalasHapusrizky, your story like a running headline news at the bottom of screen tv. it's too flat and short (--*)
BalasHapusbe better
aloha kiki^^
BalasHapusjust listen what are our friends suggest:D
and more explore your creativity because you are member of Multimedia Creative right?
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yeah, comment above me is right..
BalasHapusyou can more explore your story and mind map ky..
Keep fighting^^
Akari Kanzo, eh? pretty cool dude. i wonder what is that mean :)
BalasHapuscepeekk, why your maindmap is made from software? not your creativehand? aaaa are you got misunderstand there? :3
BalasHapusi think you can make more better mindmap :3
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too short ~
BalasHapus