Minggu, 14 September 2014

mind maping description intoroducing my self

   My name Rizky cahyo prabowo,call me Rizky.I live in Sidoarjo at wisma permai residence Waru-Sidoarjo.
   my family live in Sidoarjo,my father name is Legowo Sulistijono,my mother name is Dyah puji Rahayu,my first brother name is Eldy,and my little brother name is Akari Kanzo
   my father work as lecturer,and my mother work as assistant lecturer.my first brother lives in malang he is college student in university brawijaya malang,and my little brother is elementary student.
  i graduated in senior high school muhammadiyah 1 taman,now i'm a college student in electronic engineering polytechnic institute of surabaya,i learned in the majors multimedia broadcasting D3.My hobbies is drawing logo,art,and playing basketball,and my dream is tv station owner company director and director film maker.i hope my dream or my future goals is become true.thanks for your attention.






19 komentar:

  1. Nice mindmap you got there. Love it

    BalasHapus
  2. Brother definitely funny. May not borrow?

    BalasHapus
  3. i think your mind map is too flat and need an art taste maybe :D hehe

    BalasHapus
  4. your mind map is simple you must to try to make it to be creative

    BalasHapus
  5. your sentence line 22 about "My hobbies is drawing logo,art,and playing basketball,and my dream is tv station owner company director and director film maker", i think that "to be" isn't "is" but "are" and then the subject it must be "My Hobbies" because that is Plural. ^^ keep spirit rizky to expand your creativity :D

    BalasHapus
  6. haha I agree with Putra's comment. that your mind map its too simple~~

    BalasHapus
  7. hello rizky ^~^)/ your map from computer graphic .-. correct me if I wrong haha XD and your description is too short

    okay, review mine back rinintaoktav.blogspot.com

    BalasHapus
  8. nice mind map,but is too simple bro

    BalasHapus
  9. rizky... your mind map....... hmm so simple!, you can be more creative, okay?
    and i like your brothers name hihi "Akari Kanzo" like Japanese name

    BalasHapus
  10. rizky, i also like your lil brother's name wkwk but why his name is different with you and your big brother?.-.

    BalasHapus
  11. I think u've wrong gramatical in this sentence"...i learned in the majors multimedia broadcasting D3.My hobbies is...." Improve like this : "majoring in multimedia broadcasting. My hobbies are...". And please describe more. It's too short description.
    (ratnanuha.blogspot.com)

    BalasHapus
  12. why I feel so flat when reading it -_- improve your English, alright? fighting!!

    BalasHapus
  13. rizky, your story like a running headline news at the bottom of screen tv. it's too flat and short (--*)
    be better

    BalasHapus
  14. aloha kiki^^
    just listen what are our friends suggest:D
    and more explore your creativity because you are member of Multimedia Creative right?

    (visit and put your comments on marlanisa.blogspot.com)

    BalasHapus
  15. yeah, comment above me is right..
    you can more explore your story and mind map ky..
    Keep fighting^^

    BalasHapus
  16. Akari Kanzo, eh? pretty cool dude. i wonder what is that mean :)

    BalasHapus
  17. cepeekk, why your maindmap is made from software? not your creativehand? aaaa are you got misunderstand there? :3
    i think you can make more better mindmap :3

    don't forget visit myskullmie.blogspot.com :3

    BalasHapus